BreakRaven

Sure enough, she started shaking her head causing her brown curls to bounce back and forth.

Commas. Commas. COMMAS!!!

"I know what happened, Pagan. I don't want to talk it out with him. He's a big, cheating liar." She took a violent chomp out of her Granny Smith apple and continued glaring in Wyatt's direction. "Look at him acting like he fits in over at that table. I mean, really, who does he think he is?"

I followed her gaze. Wyatt sat leaning back in a chair, laughing at something another basketball player was saying. They all seemed pleased to have Wyatt in their presence. Normally he sat with us. This year things would be different.

Wow, Miranda is a witch. I mean, she scares the guy off and says she hates him, so he leaves her in peace and goes to hang out with his other friends who actually appreciate him, and she has the gall to insult him for it?

How dare he have a life away from her? How dare he have other friends than her and the MC? *sarcasm*

Gah. I despise people like Miranda. As far as I'm concerned, the dude can hang out with whomever he wants, since Miranda doesn't want him around - and even if she did want him around, the dude would still have the right to hang out with his other friends if he felt like it.